My own comic/manga project (preview request)

[Heinster]

I'm working on a story which I roughly drawn out in storyboard style the first 3 chapters (48 pages each).... Just finished the script of all the storyboards so I'm starting with charcter designs now.....

Especially part one is roughly drawn but try it and feel free too comment... Compliments are nice, but usefull critique is more welcome.....

Use http://www.geocities.com/davidayton/CDisplay for reading the comics (don't unpack) and remember it's basicly about the story and not the art, my current lvl is not up to the task yet.... You can read it without the program ofcourse....

part1:http://www.zshare.net/download/2408543832206b/
part2:http://www.zshare.net/download/22948323f24ea0/
part3:http://www.zshare.net/download/harrytxt3-zip.html

This is how I see my main characters at this moment but I can't draw them in all the poses I like just yet... But in the storyboards they will look more simplistic:

[Heinster]

added some character design

[Lucky-7]

This reeks of furry

[Heinster]

these are 3 out of 4 main characters the cat person is originally human but got furred due to an experiment in which he was an unvolunteerly submitted.... The last one left will be 100% human .... Most characters won't be furry at all

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[cheesecake]

i'm not dl Anyway, from the look of those 3 pics it seems like your comic is sorta...cute. Pretty cute

[maimai111]

oh nice comic,and so cute